essay 4 blog

My final essay will consist of putting all my observatory work, description of police officers and interviews throughout the course of the semester at the police station into my final portfolio. However, my most important piece of information that will be included in this summary of the time spent at the station will include a more in depth look at the emotional being of the men and women in uniform. How much they truly care for the safety of the public will be on full display. Their hard work training for various kinds of emergencies and the reason why they work so hard (because they are passionate about caring for people) was seen by  myself first hand.

Reading for 4/13

The author does a great job putting all the essays of observation at the bowling alley together. There is smooth transition between the essays as there are strong intros and conclusions giving away information about what Hanover Bowladrome is all about. Family fun is the best way to describe this awsome atmosphere. It is where the author was able to relieve stress with her family after her grandma died and it is where she observed another family (a mother and her two boys) bonding.

mid term portfolio website link

writingtwoportfolio.weebly.com